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In this short essay, we are going to be discussing the latest full episode of the extremely successful animated web show Doodle Toons - "Ah, Shaddap".

Disclaimer:

Self exploratory. This is a review.

Plot:
In this short, the main gag of the cartoon is that Jellybean can't find a place to read peacefully as multiple characters are disrupting her reading.

Pros:
The animation has good timing most of the time with anticipation (when you hold back a character for a short amount of time to make a bounce or a change in a characters position to have more impact), smears (an animation style to make movement feel more real) while also adding in more modern touches like split second references to multiple-time viewers to laugh at. The dialogue and voice acting is also spot on with Pieguyrulz, who usually does reviews, does a good performance as a charismatic show host.

Cons:
Unfortunately, Cartoonlover isn't a very good editor, characters usually move to quickly for the joke and the animation just seems rushed and/or unpolished. Also, here is a problem I see in modern animation as of late, facial features are too expressive and are animated too quickly to give a good performance. 
This isn't just a problem with Doodle Toons alone, I've seen this with professional college graduates like Sean Cunningham of Paperbag Animator fame.

Why Has It Blown Up?
So from what I can gather the series has been very successful due to the fact that Cartoonlover was an established YouTube Poop artist who left the community due to loss of interest. His subscribers were then treated to the wonderful, wacky world of Doodle Toons and with the pilot episode reaching over 70.000 hits as of writing the show does have a following of previous subscribers and new animation fans as well. The series is to me a love letter to cartoons and older cartoons like the Lonney Tunes and Tom and Jerry. Most of the time the Techniques Cartoonlover uses are either taken straight out of a Tom and Jerry short or a modernization of it 

Verdict:
Do I recommend this series? Yes. It's not the best web show you will see but if you grew up watching Boomerang like I did then you'll probably get sucked in a lot more than if you just like modern or older cartoons.


ORIGINAL VIDEO BY SomeDoodNamedJack:

  • Listening to: DooM 4's OST
  • Playing: Left 4 Dead 2



In this short essay, we are going to be discussing the latest full episode of the extremely successful animated web show Doodle Toons - "Ah, Shaddap".

Disclaimer:

Self exploratory. This is a review.

Plot:
In this short, the main gag of the cartoon is that Jellybean can't find a place to read peacefully as multiple characters are disrupting her reading.

Pros:
The animation has good timing most of the time with anticipation (when you hold back a character for a short amount of time to make a bounce or a change in a characters position to have more impact), smears (an animation style to make movement feel more real) while also adding in more modern touches like split second references to multiple-time viewers to laugh at. The dialogue and voice acting is also spot on with Pieguyrulz, who usually does reviews, does a good performance as a charismatic show host.

Cons:
Unfortunately, Cartoonlover isn't a very good editor, characters usually move to quickly for the joke and the animation just seems rushed and/or unpolished. Also, here is a problem I see in modern animation as of late, facial features are too expressive and are animated too quickly to give a good performance. 
This isn't just a problem with Doodle Toons alone, I've seen this with professional college graduates like Sean Cunningham of Paperbag Animator fame.

Why Has It Blown Up?
So from what I can gather the series has been very successful due to the fact that Cartoonlover was an established YouTube Poop artist who left the community due to loss of interest. His subscribers were then treated to the wonderful, wacky world of Doodle Toons and with the pilot episode reaching over 70.000 hits as of writing the show does have a following of previous subscribers and new animation fans as well. The series is to me a love letter to cartoons and older cartoons like the Lonney Tunes and Tom and Jerry. Most of the time the Techniques Cartoonlover uses are either taken straight out of a Tom and Jerry short or a modernization of it 

Verdict:
Do I recommend this series? Yes. It's not the best web show you will see but if you grew up watching Boomerang like I did then you'll probably get sucked in a lot more than if you just like modern or older cartoons.


ORIGINAL VIDEO BY SomeDoodNamedJack:

  • Listening to: DooM 4's OST
  • Playing: Left 4 Dead 2

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segurazz930 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016
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Disse86 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016
Thanks for watching! :)
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nnickerson10 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2016
wasnt even recomending a picture i was just saying why not make a elin oc since they are cute and have a nice costume verioty ya know and i was simply thowing ideas around he didnt need to get hissy over that
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the favorite :)
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0-0master Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
MAX READ THIS WONDERFUL COMIC!

fav.me/d3b30rw
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TheDoctorPoo Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
OK, it was pretty short but the vectors are nice?
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NickinAmerica Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015
Okay, since being mentioned on this page popped up in my messages, I just wanna clear up something... That comic is yeeeeeeeeaaaaaarrrssss old, and my art has changed a lot since then. And while the story of Silver Scales is something I'm still proud of (I was basically the first guy besides the original creator of the setting to show it off in comic form) the artwork is downright embarrassing to me, now.

Anyway, I just don't want anyone to get a bad impression.
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0-0master Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
did you read the other pages? Stare 

 NickinAmerica 

go to this wonderful bastard and you will find a folder called silver scales act 1 2 and 3....go to act 1 and there is where the remus begins.....
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TheDoctorPoo Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
"...you're gonna eat me, ARENTCHA'?"

"F(star)@$ YEAH!"

Goodbye cruel world, it's over, walk on by...
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0-0master Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
watch jjba you biggot!  

youtu.be/RRkFeJY13WQ
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